Temple Chapter 6.3

Here’s the summary of the attack on the village that the group was going to. This was kind of a cop-out, and if I could redo it I would. Originally, the fight with the beady eyed man (Kidjo) was going to take place as it was, and he was going to kill Seymour (who, when I originally wrote the character, was an arch-rival of Seymour) by punching his fist through Seymour and into a tree. Julian was then going to have his head removed by being kicked.

The fight against him was going to last longer, and he was going to reveal that the swordsman’s family killer was in the next town, and the group was going to go there to save it. It is at this time that the swordsman was going to square off with the guy that killed his family, and from him they would learn about Cardinal Milikin being the evil mastermind behind it all. That was going to lead into the last chapter where they break into the Holy Order of Abraham to kill the Cardinal.

However, I edited it all down and cut out stuff that I now regret having removed. If only I could go back in time and change it all….

Have you guys ever written something and wanted to change it afterwards, but it was too late? Talk about it. 🙂