The Legend of Abraham 3

This is information that we already know (because we all read Chapter 2, right?): Some time ago, the gods took a mortal form, but by doing so they became suseptable to mortal ailments. IE: they could now die.

However, it looks like this Veno character has been pissing off the local people, and it has finally reached the ears of the High Elder.

I was worried about this page when I first received it, because Olivia’s artwork was so awesome, but I had a lot of text to fit on the page. I think I’ve done a decent job here of making sure that you get to see her glorious background artwork (love the wooden curtain in panel 2), and not over-crowd the panels. Your thoughts?

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